Xanga just doesn't seem to be the "hip" place to be so I am taking my blogging elsewhere. My family is using blogspot for their blogs so in an attempt to keep us all together and to make reading easier for the less-tech-savy in mi familia, I have set a new one up there. It is www.grubstreetscribbler.blogspot.com I will be linking to blogs by my sister, cousin, good friend living in Kenya, and my blog from when I lived in Kenya (though I won't be updating that unless I go back and do something similar). Hate to disrupt you my avid readers (there are probably 2 max that still read this), but I am moving on. New stuff regularly at:
Dead white man remembered Visions of times gone by Poking and prodding with fine silver picks through the Melting, moldering mush behind his eyes Can we see through those foggy marbles with all of our Methods, our science, our modernism His intertextuality, his sexuality, His ménage à trois of passions, fallacies, and regrets?
I have decided to post the poetry I have been working on lately.
I am taking a creative writing studio class, and also starting a similar program aimed at teen with the WF Library. THUS, I have a lot of new stuff and decided that I ought to share some of it. Here goes:
p.s. These are mostly rough drafts that I am not completely happy with, feel free to comment
O'Hara I Am Not
It is 5:18 and I am floating near the end of class So far Pollack has painted, Lady Day has died, And I have finished a can of Squirt which reminds me
Of a dusty ’66 Ford truck without seatbelts Unsuccessfully spitting sunflower seeds out the window On the way to the lumbar yard on scratchy unnatural upholstery And I notice the rust on my hands after I slam the door.
Hardly anyone speaks up in class, yet as soon as it is over No one can hear because all speak at the same time The tiled floor and and molded tin ceiling Reflecting the voices, turning them into noise Broken sentences flying about hitting me in the head As I try to hide, entrenched behind my laptop, Barricading myself from the shrapnel of those statements.
The truck was sold long ago And with it went my childhood It was a rainy Saturday afternoon when my innocence Drove away in the hands of a man I had met only once before And would never see again. I hope he treats it well, but inside I know he won’t
The classroom has now emptied and all that is left are Flickering fluorescent lights The hum of electronics left on, forgotten in the corner And me Still hiding
Wondering where the truck is now, Maybe I could buy it back.
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